1.SETTING
place:At the beach
Time:Daytime
Season:Summer
2.Summary-The story focuses more on Jerry who was an English boy and eleven years old.He was a good swimmer and enjoy swimming most of the time.He like his mother[widow] because she likes her too.He likes meeting new people and try to the best of his ability to make friends with them.It occurs in the story when he met with big brown boys ,he try to make friends with them by being kind to them.Although it was too difficult for him to swim well at the beginning,at the end he managed to be able to swim for quite a long time without covering his nose.He does not lose hope whenever he fail/did not succeed .He keep on trying until he got the solution.He keep on training himself until he became a good swimmer.
Jerry was having a good relationship with his mother and loves her alot because she was supporting him in order to overcome all the obstacles he was facing when he was learning how to swim.She bought him googles that Jerry can use to cover his eyes when he is diving.Jerry likes being at the beach and its were he actually spend most of his time swimming and it was his hobby.
3.Main Character:
Jerry -He was an English boy
-A forgeiner
-He was eleven years old
-He was a good swimmer and very friendly to others
-He was very determined
-He had self -confidance
-Very kind and a hard worker
-Well mannered and displined to his mother
Well done Zelinha, you got 8/10. You could get out-out if you specified acxactly where it took place.
ReplyDeletewell done. you did good but you failed to extend your points for main characters.
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